托福写作语料库积累（一）

　　托福写作语料库积累（一）

　　一、写作语料库积累：哪种朋友最重要

　　Thefriends that you can have fun with are more important than the friends that you canget help from?

　　你喜欢交可以给你带来快乐的朋友还是可以帮助你的朋友?

　　1. A close and congenial friend is what every individual aspires after.

　　拥有亲密无间的和志同道合的朋友是人人都渴望的。

　　【 点评】：…… is what every individual aspires after …… 是人人渴望的

　　【点评】：congenial friends = like-minded friends n 志同道合的朋友

　　2. A day without friendship is like a day without sunshine.

　　没有友谊的生活就像是没有阳光的生活。

　　【点评】：个性开篇，谈及友谊对于生活的意义。

　　3. a trustworthy friend n 值得信赖的朋友

　　【点评】：trustworthy = reliable adj 可以信赖的

　　4. Those who can go through thick and thin together with you

　　那些可以和你风雨同舟的人(作家文采)

　　5. a shoulder to cry on n

　　可以提供慰藉的人

　　【点评】：该短语是口语用法，比较地道，写作中可使用一次，体现表达的丰富。

　　6. a humorous friend = a friend with great sense of humor n 一个幽默的朋友

　　7. enjoy wonderful time together = have fun together v 一起享受欢乐时光

　　8.sincere friends n 真诚的朋友

　　9. intimate friends n 亲密的朋友

　　10. bosom friends n 密友;知己

　　11. Prosperity helps us make friends，however，adversity helps us try them.

　　富贵易交友，患难见真情。(作家观点)

　　【点评】：try sb v 考验某人

　　12. A friend in need is a friend in deed

　　患难见真情

　　【点评】：in need adv 在危难中

　　【点评】：in deed adv 真正地

　　13. The most essential standard to judge a true friend is whether he or she willprovide us with timely support in time of plight.

　　判断好友的最重要的标准就是，是否他或她愿意在逆境中给我们提供及时的帮助(观点总结)

　　14. Whenever I run into unexpected adverse circumstances， it is Sandy thatprovides me with emotional support and spiritual consolation.

　　无论何时我遇到意想不到的困境，Sandy 总是可以给我提供情感支持和精神安慰。(例证支持)

　　15. I believe true friend can surpass the age limitation. I always take my father asmy trustworthy friend from whom I really benefit a great deal.

　　我相信好友是超越年龄的限制，我一直认为爸爸是值得信赖的朋友，从他身上我获益良多。(细节展开)

　　【点评】：重视自我情感的自由写作

　　16. This debate reminds me of the experience of striving for attending my dreamgraduate school. After failing the exam for two times, I thought of giving up halfway,however, my father provided me with an ocean of assistance both financially andspiritually.

　　话题使我联想起我为考研奋斗的经历，两次尝试失败过后，我曾经想过放弃，但是，我的爸爸给我提供了经济和精神方面的巨大的支持。(细节展开)

　　【点评】：重视自我情感的自由写作，更加容易文思泉涌，更加容易打动考官，因为我们先感动了自己。

　　17. Instead of curling into a ball beneath the table， I ended up mustering up mycourage, learning from my failure and marching courageously towards the nextopportunity.

　　我没有蜷缩成球，藏在桌下， 相反，我最终鼓起勇气， 从失败中学习，为争取下次机会努力前行(作家文采)

　　【点评】：curl into a ball beneath the table 蜷缩成球，藏在桌下(比喻用法)

　　【点评】：end up doing sth v 最终以 …… 为结局(精彩表达)

　　【点评】：muster up one’s courage to do sth 鼓起勇气做 …… (推荐背诵)

　　【点评】：march courageously towards ……v 向着 …… 勇敢前行

　　18. A humorous friend can never fail to help us to see the sunny side, especiallywhen we feel frustrated and depressed.

　　幽默的朋友可以帮助我们看到积极的一面，尤其是当我们感到沮丧和挫败的时候。

　　【点评】：never fail to = always adv 一直……

　　点评：第一人称写法更加有说服力

　　19. A humorous friend can, to large extent, help us remain cheerful in time ofadversity.

　　富有幽默感的朋友，可以在很大程度上帮助我们在逆境中保持乐观情绪。

　　【 点评】：remain cheerful = see the sunny side = be optimistic about …… v 保持乐观

　　20. Opting for friends who are willing to give unselfish help outshines choosingfriends with whom we can feel the sense of humor.

　　选择愿意慷慨相助的朋友胜过了选择可以给让我们带来幽默的朋友.

　　【点评】：核心观点句：主题句亮剑或者尾段总结作家立场。

　　二、托福写作语料库积累：Uber停止测试自动驾驶

　　Uber said it is suspending(暂停/叫停) self-driving car tests(无人驾驶测试) in all North American cities after a fatal accident(致命事故).

　　A 49-year-old woman was hit by a car and killed as she crossed the street in Tempe, Arizona.

　　While self-driving cars have been involved in multiple(各种) accidents, it is thought to be the first time an autonomous car has been involved in a fatal collision(碰撞).

　　Uber said that its "hearts go out to the victim's family".

　　"We're fully cooperating with @TempePolice and local authorities as they investigate(调查) this incident", the company said in a statement on Twitter.

　　Our hearts go out to the victim’s family. We’re fully cooperating with @TempePolice and local authorities as they investigate this incident.

　　— Uber Comms (@Uber_Comms) March 19, 2018

　　Police said the accident happened Sunday night while the car was in autonomous mode(处于自动驾驶模式). A human monitor was also behind the wheel(坐在驾驶室/掌控方向盘).

　　Police said the woman, Elaine Herzberg, had not been using a pedestrian crossing(行人斑马线). Herzberg was taken to a local hospital where she died.

　　The US National Highway Traffic Safety Administration and the National Transportation Safety Board said they were sending teams to Tempe.

　　'Wake up call'警钟

　　Companies including Ford, General Motors, Tesla and Waymo(谷歌投资的自动驾驶公司) are investing heavily in(在......方面投入重金) research to develop self-driving cars, which are often characterised as(被塑造成) the future of the industry and hailed(称赞) as a way to reduce traffic accidents.

　　Many states across America have welcomed the tests in the hope of keeping themselves at the forefront of new technology(站在新技术的前沿).

　　However, there have been warnings that the technology is being deployed before it is ready.

　　Anthony Foxx, who served as US Secretary of Transportation under former President Barack Obama, called the accident a "wake up call to the entire [autonomous vehicle] industry and government to put a high priority on(优先对待/把......放在首位) safety."

　　More than a dozen states in the US allow autonomous vehicles on the roads to some degree. Officials typically require a person to be on hand either in the car or remotely(远程) in case(以防万一) something goes wrong, according to the Center for Automotive Research.

　　The US is working on national safety guidelines(指导意见) for such vehicles.

　　Consumer Watchdog, a lobby group(游说团体) that has warned of the risks of autonomous cars, on Monday called for a moratorium(暂停) of such vehicles on public roads, describing the accident as a "tragedy(悲剧) we have been fighting years to prevent".

　　"We hope our calls for real regulation(管理/规范) of driverless cars will be taken seriously going forward by Silicon Valley(硅谷) and the Trump Administration(特朗普政府)," the group wrote on Twitter.

　　Uber started testing driverless cars in Pittsburgh in 2016. The ride-hailing firm(打车公司) has also been testing driverless cars in San Francisco, Pittsburgh, Toronto and the Phoenix area, which includes Tempe.

　　The death comes a year after Uber took its self-driving cars off the road following an accident that left a Volvo SUV on its side in Arizona. The programme was later reinstated(恢复).

　　Carla Bailo, president and chief executive of the Center for Automotive Research, said more information about how the crash occurred is necessary before officials can say what went wrong and how the self-driving system should be improved.

　　She also said the fatality(致命性) should be considered in the context of all accidents.

　　More than 37,000 people, including almost 6,000 pedestrians(行人), died in traffic accidents in the US in 2016, according to the US Department of Transportation.

　　"We need to be fair and look at all the data," she said. "But I don't think anybody is taking this lightly(对......置若罔闻). By far safety is the first concern(最重要的事情).

　　Tempe Mayor Mark Mitchell said he supports autonomous car tests because of the technology's potential. He also praised Uber's decision to suspend the programme as "responsible".

　　"Our city leadership and Tempe Police will pursue(追求/寻找) any and all answers to what happened in order to ensure safety moving forward," he said.

　　三、托福写作语料库积累：关于手机因特网

　　语料库：

　　关于电视节目：

　　美国比较流行的情景剧：Friends, Big Bang Theory, Friends, and Boston Legal，Breaking Bad, How I Met Your Mother 等等。

　　句子：

　　TV series like xxx, xxx, and xxx (列举以上的细节如Friends等) can be great fun to watch. I can not only learn the most natural way to speak English, but also I have a chance to know American cultures.

　　当然还有一些纪录片形式的电视节目我们可以说：

　　TV documentaries can be very informative, and they target different kinds of audience. They cover lots of topics like sports, animal word, history, and even religions. Just by laying on the couch, you can really learn a lot about all kinds of stuff.

　　就电脑、因特网、手机笔者做一下的总结：

　　导入下面语料的引子lead in:

　　With wifi access and a tablet /cell phone /computer/laptop, you can do lots of stuff.

　　网上购物on-line shopping:

　　It is a very convenient and fun way to buy stuff on-line, with just a click of the button, the next moment you know, your order is delivered right at your door. It is also easy to compare the price offered by different on-line stores, the only thing you need to remember is that always to shop in a reputable on-line store.

　　以最便捷的方式获取新闻quick access to breaking news:

　　It is definitely a great way to have access to breaking news, you can acquire information on what is happening around the globe.

　　社交Social:

　　It is a convenient and efficient way to enjoy our personal lives. By signing up on a social network like facebook, MSN, and wechat, which is so popular in China, you can get to know more people. By sending text message to your friends and family members whenever you want to, I think internet has brought people closer than ever, it makes communication so instant.

　　四、托福写作语料库积累：关于饮食

　　健康饮食的重要性 ：

　　鼓励健康饮食习惯：encourage healthy eating habits ,

　　保持体形：keep fit,

　　集中注意力：concentrate/focus on; 容易分散注意力：get easily distracted

　　营养：nutrient, 特定的维生素：certain vitamins;

　　油腻的垃圾食品不含孩子成长所需的必要维生素，这样孩子无法在学习中集中注意力,因此学校应该鼓励健康饮食。

　　Greasy junk food lacks certain vitamins for the healthy development of the children, and students without sufficient healthy food might suffer from lack of concentration on their study and they get easily distracted, thus school should encourage healthy eating habit.

　　垃圾食品：junk food, French fries, hamburgers;

　　高热量：with high carbs, 油腻：greasy;

　　儿童肥胖：child obesity;

　　摄入过多的高热量垃圾食品会导致儿童肥胖。

　　It is really important for the school to encourage healthy eating habits, and junk food like French fries and hamburgers alike should be banned in schools. Too much junk food with high carbs leads to childhood obesity.

　　健康食品 ：

　　海鲜类： salmon， tuna, shrimp

　　水果类：fruits such as berries, apples, cherries, pineapple, oranges, frozen grapes, watermelon, cantaloupe,

　　蔬菜类：Vegetables - broccoli, carrots, cherry tomatoes, potatoes and sweet potatoes

　　高蛋白质低热量：high in protein low carbs

　　非常好的结合：a wonderful combination

　　学校应该提供蔬菜和水果等低热量高维生素的食品。

　　School should offer students a variety of healthy food and snack ranging from vegetables to different kinds of fruit. Like broccoli, carrots, cherry tomatoes, and apples, cherries, pineapple are also good choices. They are low in carbs, and vitamin rich.

　　通过适当的教育学生会做出更好的饮食决策：

　　Hopefully, with proper education, students can make appropriate eating choices.

　　既然学生可以摄取合理的营养，他们会更加集中注意力也会保持好的体形。

　　Since students are getting the proper nutrients, they will concentrate better on their study and also they will be more fit.

　　五、托福写作语料库积累：关于教育

　　一个国家教育如何提高：

　　课程设置要突出实用性，这样可以增加学生毕业后的就业机会。

　　重点词汇、短语：practical，get xxx ready for

　　I would say that the courses offered in universities should be more practical, specifically, they should get students ready for future jobs and increase students' future job opportunities.

　　决策者应该想办法降低高等教育的成本，现在高等教育太贵了比如生活费、书费和学费太高。

　　重点词汇、词组：make it accessible to ，cost of living, textbooks and skyrocketing tuitions

　　I would say the decision makers should figure out a way to reduce the cost tertiary education and make it accessible to everyone. Currently, our universities and colleges are super expensive, the cost of living, textbooks and skyrocketing tuitions, all these combined makes it hard for lots of brilliant kids to receive higher education.

　　让大学生更加自由的选择专业, 现在高考成绩一般的学生没有机会学习比较火的专业如经济金融，政府应该让学生更加自由的选择专业而不应该用高考分数限定学生的选择。

　　重点词汇、词组：not be motivated to 没有动力做某事， be into 非常喜欢，be given to chance to do s/th, be based on 基于

　　Personally, I think government should make it easier for student to choose their majors. Currently, it is very hard, if not impossible for lots of average students to choose popular majors like economics, finance and accounting, cuz you have to get a really high score in college entrance exam. As known to all, one might not be motivated to do something unless he or she is really into that, students should be given to chance to choose majors they are interested in and it shouldn't be based on exam scores, thus they will better employ their creativity and imagination and be more likely to be successful in college.

　　教育的功能、目标the purpose of education：

　　传授知识、培养实用性技术impart knowledge and cultivate practical skills, provides students with the tools and skills

　　句子：

　　The utmost purpose of education is to impart knowledge and cultivate practical skills so that the students can be successful in their future career, like to become physicians, pilots, professors, architects, even engineers.

　　Tertiary education(高等教育) provides students with the tools and skills that are essential for them to be successful in their future career.

　　培养道德情操、求实精神：develop morality and values to live a good life and build up character to seek the truth

　　句子：

　　大学教育的另外一个功能是培养学生的道德情操、正确的价值观、树立人格、求真等良好品质，这些品质对一个人的未来的职业是至关重要的。

　　Another important function of university is to develop morality and cultivate values to live a decent life and help the students to build up character, and to seek the truth, and I think these qualities are very important to have in order to be a mature person.

　　帮助学生吸收知识、协助成长： the exploration of knowledge, to help students grow, to make men complete, explore our utmost ability, constant simulation, makes us understand things better

　　句子：

　　重点词汇、词组：noble cause光荣的使命，lead xxx on the path of, well-rounded全面的, constant simulation 不断的刺激

　　高等教育是个光荣使命，在知识的道路上引导学生、帮助学生成为更加健全的人。人生就是一个不断学习的过程，大学让我们追求卓越、更好的洞察世事。

　　The noble cause of higher education is to lead students on the path of the exploration of knowledge, and help them to grow in to a more well rounded and compete person. You know, human beings need constant simulation to grow or it will die, university helps us to explore our utmost ability and makes us understand things better.

　　人人都应该给机会接受高等教育

　　句子：

　　重点词组：people from all walks of life, prestigious, be accessible/available to anyone, fairness, social status, underprivileged 弱势群体，climb up social ladder

　　大学教育应该人人平等，孔子说有教无类;如果只有富人有接受高等教育的机会，那么社会的不公平现象将会变得更加严重，弱势群体通往社会上层的通道就会被阻碍。

　　I would say that higher education should be available to people from all walks of life, as prestigious Chinese philosopher Confucius said: education should be received by anyone no matter what their social status are. Suppose higher education is available only to the rich, then only the rich will be likely to succeed and then the underprivileged will never get a chance to climb up the social ladder, that is not fair.

　　六、托福写作语料库积累：关于艺术

　　艺术指导我们的生活，并可以让人们回忆过去并且让未来更美好。

　　Art shapes our life, it also helps to preserve history, it serves as a reminder of yesterday, and a maker of tomorrow and it also conveys idea.

　　短语：stir up emotion

　　造句：科学有时候不如艺术更好的激起想象力和情感。

　　Art's ability to stir up imaginations and emotions about a subject that science might not be able to, and I am not saying that science is not important, I just think art is a necessary complement to science.

　　短语：bring comfort and hope, expressing their happiness,

　　造句：音乐给人带来慰藉和希望，并能表达情感。(注：举例子如高兴、忧伤和愤怒)

　　Music can also bring comfort and hope to people, and it is important to people expressing their happiness, sorrow and even anger.

　　肖邦的例子：

　　单词、短语：facilitate change, bind society, the most prestigious musician, defend against ;

　　肖邦用音乐鼓励同胞抵抗沙皇俄国：

　　XXX is a helpful tool to facilitate change, and even a device for comfort and security that helps to bind society, like the most prestigious musician Chopin created great music so his fellow countrymen could unite and defend their country against Russian invasion.

　　用文革举例子，引以为戒：

　　短语：a great part of our lives， xxx helps xxx to prosper, a good case in point

　　一个没有文化的国家都算不上是个国家，艺术是创造、是表达方式;中国的文革破坏了文化遗产让国家停滞不前。

　　A society without art is not much of a society at all, for art is essential and a great part of our lives. Art is really about invention and expression, it helps a country prosper culturally. The Culture Revolution happened a few decades ago in China is a good case in point, music and art were stifled, and the country basically stopped functioning.

　　七、托福写作语料库积累：关于书籍电影音乐

　　关于music的类型Type/genre： rock & roll, R&B, reggae, country, Jazz, electronic, folklore(民谣), classical music;

　　伟大音乐家的名字Great Musicians：Beethoven, Bach, Mozart

　　流行音乐人Pop singers: Eminem, Beyonce, Jay Z. Taylor Swift, Bruno Mars, Rihana.

　　电影的类型Types of movies：thriller(惊悚片), suspense(悬疑片), comedy, action, documentary, science fiction, romance(爱情片), Animation(动画片), horror (恐怖片)

　　有名的电影导演Director(后面附有该导演的著名电影名字):

　　Peter Jackson: Return of the King

　　Steven Speilberg: Jurassic Park (侏罗纪公园)

　　James Cameron: Avatar(阿凡达), Titanic

　　Christopher Nolan: the Batman, the Dark Night;

　　著名演员Actors and actresses: Jackie Chen, Bruce Lee, Brad Pitt, Angelina Julie, Leonardo DiCaprio

　　就电影、音乐和书籍的作用和效果而言，小编总结了一下几个共同特点;所以当考生看到任何跟电影、音乐和书籍有关的题目时都可以巧妙的应用以下理由。

　　缓解压力: ease/release + my pressure/stress/tension/depression from both my life and study;

　　让生活和学习变得更有效率、充实：improve /enhance/ increase + learning/study efficiency/productivity of the day;

　　精神焕发：refresh myself, revitalize/revive my mood;

　　激起情感和想象力：bring about different kinds of emotions; stir/stimulate my imagination; (注解：听音乐、看悬疑电影的时候)

　　句子：

　　小说、电影的线索很迷人：

　　The storyline/plot is very attractive/engaging/intriguing;

　　看电影、读小说的时候身临其境忘乎所以：

　　When I read this masterpiece/watch this movie, I find time irrelevant and I totally forget about the time. I tune everything out around me and am so attracted in the storyline and I feel tied up to the character in the novel/movie.

　　没有什么可以阻止我看完这部小说或电影：

　　I feel like the characters in the novel/movie connect to me so much that nothing could hold me back from reading/watching it until I finish the novel/movie.

　　八、托福写作语料库积累：实用课程和兴趣课程

　　1、Some people think that students should be encouraged to study those fields such as science, technology, engineering and mathematics rather than they have interest in. Do you agree or disagree?有人认为学生们应该学习科技，工程学，数学，而不是他们感兴趣的课程，你是否认同这个观点?

　　2、It is more important to choose to study a subject that interests you than a subject preparing you better for a job or career. Do you agree or disagree?学习感兴趣的课程比学习有助于就业的课程更加重要，你是否同意这个观点?(

　　3、Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 有人认为学生们应该学习他们感兴趣的科目，有人认为学生们应该学习对于未来有用的课程，讨论两种观点，谈及你的立场。

　　托福写作范文赏析：

　　首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 写作立场

　　Education is one of the key words of our time, however, people's views differ greatly as to which should be the superior option of academic pursuit, to opt for courses conducing to future career or to focus on subjects that interest them. As I see it, compared with choosing subjects that can help young adults ready themselves for career challenges, to deliberately specialize in one's favorite courses is more commendable.

　　二段：反驳段：学习感兴趣的课程的利好

　　Opting for the courses in which one takes considerable interest will enjoy more visible merits. First, one's study motivation can be highly stimulated provided that one can choose subjects exerting a peculiar fascination on him or her. Conversely, people might generate career burnout even if they might get profit-making jobs.

　　三段：反驳段：学习感兴趣的课程的利好

　　Also, taking one's favorite subjects can fully tap his or her infinite potentials. Meanwhile, one can fully enjoy the process of learning and career life. Apart from that, it is also a sort of success if one can perfectly combine specialized knowledge with career ambition. Therefore, college students have sound reasons to select the courses that interest them.

　　四段：让步段：学习实用性课程的利好

　　Indeed, I have to concede that the acquisition of pragmatic courses might still have some benefits. Sure enough, job-related courses will help one outshine many candidates and successfully secure a decent job. That is why some people feel that education is a kind of investment and competitive courses such as engineering, science and technology can, in most cases, earn high interests. Thereby, what some people are concerned about is whether the course of their choice can lead to a profitable career. After all, career-related subjects can lay a solid foundation for climbing the career ladder.

　　尾段：亮明观点 + (总结理由)

　　In closing, I re-affirm my conviction that even though choosing utilitarian subjects is never without merit, university students should still be encouraged to choose their favorite areas of study.

　　托福写作语料库：词组

　　1. course = subject n.课程

　　2. career-oriented course = career-oriented subjects 以就业为导向的课程

　　3. take considerable interest in … = take keen interest in … 对于……很感兴趣

　　4. secure a decent job = get a decent career 找到一份体面的工作

　　托福写作句法语料：

　　1. conduce to … 有助于……

　　2. sure enough 的确

　　3. enjoy more visible merits 有更多的明显的利好

　　4. to do sth. is more commendable 去做某事更加值得推荐

　　5. to do sth. deserves more recommendations 去做某事更加值得推荐

　　托福写作语料库：短语

　　1. ready themselves for career challenges 使他们为未来的事业挑战做好准备

　　2. exert a peculiar fascination on sb. 对于某人极其有吸引力

　　3. might generate career burnout 也许会产生职业倦怠

　　4. fully tap one's infinite potentials 充分地开发一个人的无限潜能

　　5. combine specialized knowledge with career ambition 把专业知识和职业梦想结合起来

　　6. choose utilitarian subjects 选择实用性的课程

　　7. choose their favorite areas of study 选择他们喜欢的学习领域

　　8. outshine many candidates 胜过很多的候选人

　　9. lead to a profitable career 带来一个有利可图的事业

　　10. can lay a solid foundation for climbing the career ladder 可以为攀登事业的阶梯打下坚实的基础

　　九、托福写作语料库积累：教师是否需要进修

　　Should all school teachers be required to attend courses every 5 years to update their knowledge?

　　所有中小学教师都应该被要求每五年进修学习一次，是否认同?

　　托福写作语料库

　　1. In this age of knowledge explosion， many employees usually feel weak in keeping the of pace career development. 在这个知识爆炸的时代，很多职员感到他们很难跟上事业发展的步伐。

　　2. It is wise to require every school educator to update knowledge 要求中小学教育者充电学习是明智的选择。

　　解析：update one’s knowledge v更新知识(充电学习)

　　拓展：acquire new knowledge v 学习新知识

　　3. Updating knowledge is a fundamental requirement for a highly qualified teacher .更新知识是对于一个高度合格的教育者的最基本的要求.

　　4. Students are more likely to enjoy their study if their teachers can disseminate knowledge more vividly and humorously 如果老师们可以更加生动地幽默地传播知识，学生们就会更加享受学习。

　　拓展：disseminate knowledge = pass on knowledge = convey knowledge v传播知识

　　解析：dis(分开)+ semin(种子)+ ate(动词词尾)= disseminate v 传播

　　5. Learners， in most cases， will respect and admire a teacher who is knowledgeable enough to answer the questions they raise. 学生们，多数情况下会尊敬和喜欢一个可以解答他们的疑问的博学的老师。

　　解析：students = learners n学习者

　　6. It is commendable for school educators to receive better professional training at least every five years. 中小学教育者至少每五年接受一次职业教育培训的做法是值得赞美的。

　　解析：commendable adj 值得赞美的

　　7. Further educational training can make an instructor rediscover the beauty of the teaching career. 进修学习可以使得一个教育者重新发现教学的美丽。

　　8. Otherwise，the sense of burnout will gradually grow on them 否则的话，他们会渐渐产生一种职业的倦怠。

　　解析：grow on v 加深对于…… 的影响

　　解析：sense of burnout n倦怠感

　　9. Therefore，those who receive on-the-job training will become more faithful to the organizations they serve because they can feel the sense of belonging and being valued. 接受在职培训老师们对于所他们服务的企业会更加忠诚，因为他们可以感受到一种归属感，一种被重视的感觉。

　　解析： on-the-job training n 在职培训

　　10. When teachers excel in their specialized knowledge， not only does them become more popular among students, but also it may inspire their creativity and passion in teaching.当老师们精通专业知识的时候，他们不仅仅可以受到学生的欢迎，更加可以鼓励他们的创造力和工作热情。

　　解析：excel in professional knowledge v 精通专业知识

　　11. If teachers’ motivation can be highly stimulated, their dedication to teaching career and spirit of self-improvement will inject new life into the further prosperity of relevant schools. 当老师们教学热情被极大地激发的时候，他们的敬业态度和自我提高的精神会给相关学校的发展注入新鲜的活力。

　　拓展：inject new life into = inject fresh vitality into v 为……注入新鲜活力

　　12. Elementary knowledge are so simple that school teachers needn’t to take trouble to update their knowledge. 基础知识都是很简单的，因此中小学的教育者没有必要专门更新知识。

　　13. Still, on-job training scheme will impose much pressure upon a school economically. 另外，在职培训的计划会给一个学校增加巨大的经济压力。

　　解析：impose much pressure upon a …… economically v 为……增加经济压力

　　14. All school educators should be required to attend relevant training courses to maintain competitive every five years. 所有的教育者应该被要求每五年参加相关的培训以保持竞争力。

　　15. …… can enhance the reputation of a school = …… can make a school enjoy tremendous popularity …… 可以提高一个学校的美誉度。

　　解析：enjoy tremendous popularity v 享有盛誉

　　拓展：tremendous = great adj 极大的

　　十、托福写作语料库积累：现在比过去更容易接受教育

　　People are now easier to become educated than in the past. Do you agree or disagree 现代人比过去更加容易接受教育，是否认同?

　　托福写作语料库：

　　1. Education is one of the key words of our time，a man without education，man of us believe，is the victim of adversity.教育是我们时代的关键词之一，一人没有受过教育的人，我们很多人认为，是逆境的牺牲者。

　　点评：本句谈及教育的重要性。

　　2. Education has a key role to play in one’s personal growth and a nation’s further development. 教育在个人成长和国家的发展中发挥了重要的重要。

　　解析：has a key role to play in…… 在……方面可以发挥重要的重要

　　3. People differ greatly in their views over whether people are easier to get educated than before. 关于是否人们比过去更加容易接受教育，人们的观点差异很大。

　　4. It seems easier for people to get well-educated in the present day society. 当今社会，似乎人们更加容易接受良好的教育。

　　解析：get well-educated = receive fine education v 接受良好的教育

　　5. The Internet greatly diversifies people’s option of receiving education. 互联网使得人们接受教育的选择更加多元化。

　　解析：diversify = enrich v 使多样化

　　6. With the popularity of on-line education, people could acquire and update knowledge via drawing on rich on-line educatioal resource. 由于网络教育的流行，人们可以通过利用丰富的在线教育资源，学习知识，不断充电。

　　解析：update knowledge v充电(学习)

　　7. Distance education is highly convenient, because learners can be free to take any suitable course through an on-line course selection system. 远程教育高度便利，因为学习者可以通过在线的选课系统，自由选择适合自己的课程。

　　点评：本句还可以对比网络教育以及课堂教育。

　　8. It can effectively surmount geographical barrier and enhance the flexibility of learning，therefore，many learners in remote areas have access to fine teaching resources 网络教育有效地克服了地域的障碍，提高了学习的灵活性，因此，很多偏远地区的学习者也有机会获得良好的教育资源。

　　9. In this sense, distance learning provide people with more opportunities to receive fine education, some special learning group, such as disabled learners, ill students or busy employees, could serve as perfect examples. 因此，远程学习给人们提供了更多的机会去接受良好的教育，一些特殊的学习群体，例如残疾学习者，生病的学生，忙碌的企业职员都是很好接受网络教育的例证。

　　解析：serve as perfect examples 是很好的例证

　　10. In addition to the availability of various cyber educational resources, the state support in education is another stimulating factor that facilitate various education 除了各种在线网络教育资源，国家在教育方面的支持是另外一个因素，对于各种教育提供便利。

　　解析：facilitate v 使容易;有助于……

　　11. Education is the driving force of productivity, in this sense, the government of many developed and developing country attach great importance to the instruction. 教育是生产力的驱动力，因此，很多发达国家和发展中国家的政府高度重视教育。

　　解析：attach great importance to = lay more stress on = give priority to v 更加重视……

　　12. Thanks to the support from the government such as popularizing free elementary education or promoting the salary of teachers， more and more people have access to fine education, especially for those who coming from poverty-stricken families or remote rural areas 因为政府支持，例如普及免费的基础教育或者是提高教育者的薪水，很多人有机会接受良好的教育，尤其是对于那些来自贫困的家庭或者是遥远的乡村地区。

　　解析：thanks to 多亏了

　　13. Past several decades witnessed obvious multiplication of family income, which enables those who cannot afford high tuition fees of university to receive higher education. 过去很多年，人们的家庭收入增加，这使得很多不能支付大学教育的人有机会接受高等教育。

　　14. Meanwhile, more and more people begin to recognize the significance of education and the pleasure of life-long learning, that is why so many training organizations spring up overnight. 同时，很多人认识到教育的意义和终身学习的乐趣，这就是为何很多的培训机构一夜之间涌现出来。

　　15. Even those retired old men now have more opportunities to develop their personal interest by means of selecting their favorite training courses. 即使，退休的老人现在又更多的机会通过选择自己喜爱的培训课程发展自己的个人兴趣。

　　16. It is indeed easier for modern people to receive good education because of the availability of diverse mode of education, the assistance from the government and the increase of family income 现在人接受良好的教育确实是更加容易，因为人们可以利用各种教育的模式，因为政府支持教育，因为家庭收入的增加。

　　解析：indeed adv 确实